tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1110866850614333902.post8246420540437384711..comments2022-10-31T01:10:49.275-07:00Comments on Susan Ogilvie's Studio Life: Calculating the Composition, Part 2Susan Ogilviehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14747110089041347159noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1110866850614333902.post-29268413790546295562009-05-14T13:55:00.000-07:002009-05-14T13:55:00.000-07:00Hi Susan,
I can say that composition isn't my mid...Hi Susan,<br /><br />I can say that composition isn't my middle name :-).<br />However I can tell that although the focusing point almost attracts the viewer's without traveling a bit around the landscape, the mentioned tree on the right with its large mass and the golden yellow field, add the necessary balance.<br />In terms of palette, I find it to be well chosen, contributing to unify the work.<br /><br />Kind regards,<br /><br />JoséJosé Carrilho (Go Detail)https://www.blogger.com/profile/08965916774046623372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1110866850614333902.post-42368678703837972432009-05-12T18:31:00.000-07:002009-05-12T18:31:00.000-07:00I think your lighting is superb. No really dark s...I think your lighting is superb. No really dark shadows, the light source seemingly lower in the sky, it's all very diffuse and definitely early-spring. Excellent! I wish I could see fields like this in person.PastelGuyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14456333187417895058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1110866850614333902.post-73964249206268709782009-05-11T19:01:00.000-07:002009-05-11T19:01:00.000-07:00Adding the puddles that reflect the sky, and lead ...Adding the puddles that reflect the sky, and lead one into the painting is a nice intuitive touch! I am glad you have started a blog. Thank you.Bob Lafondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18085582734443199505noreply@blogger.com